Jandee's Different Kind of Art
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Yesh. Jandee likes to write poetry. I will show you one poem for now. It's inspired by both Billy Collins and ee cummings.
I also do ceramics, but I have no photos right now. If any of you would like to see then I will go take some pics, I 'suppose.
being PC isnt PC anymore
nothing is as it seems
what was right is no longer
            right
its all wrong in the eyes of
someone
anyone
Personal Computers are
taking over the world
             they tell me
falling from one Piece into
two
Postal Code is no longer in the
dictionary
all because
no one sends Post Cards
            or so im told
the place of travel is not
hawaii or the bahamas its
Paradise City
or Port Charlotte
where even with all the Prince Charmings
Physical Contact is            non-existent
its unspeakable
hidden
a lie
they say
but i see
Pencil Crayons
     fa     d
     ll      o
     in     w
     g      n
the
Pilot Chute
and into
e   t   e   r   n   i   t   y
Johndeer (#524)
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06-14-2010 at 2:49 AM
-cries- It got all messed up. D: I guess I'll fix it at some point...<br /><br />Thank you so much, Peppermint. I'd consider it a visual piece. I'm not much of a performer.
Peppermint (#3354)
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05-16-2010 at 2:24 AM
I really like your poetry! It sounds really good in my head, like it should be performed, not just read. Anyways, just wanted to say that!
Johndeer (#524)
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04-5-2010 at 1:46 AM
Capitalization.<br /><br />Hehe. I don't really mind. I was a little sad, but, now, not so much. I think I'm gonna get some photos of my ceramics to make a thread on.
Gracie's Side (#214)
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04-5-2010 at 1:44 AM
Interesting... like the capitalization? And the spacing. Or d'you mean all the PC words? <br /><br />I'z not stalker. :< But it was sad that your poetry had no responses. And I feel sad when my threads are lonely. And I feel sad right now. So I wanted to make sure your thread wasn't lonely and sad.
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04-5-2010 at 1:41 AM
-pokes Gracie- Stalker. I couldn't figure out how to format it on Clandestine, that's why. It's on my deviantART though. Yesh. I love the spacing. Do you notice anything interesting about the words? And yes, I loved the preview button. lol.
Gracie's Side (#214)
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04-5-2010 at 1:39 AM
*pokes Jandee's thread* I don't recognize this one. :o You put in lovely visual spacing, though. Enjoy that preview button, did you?